'Dirty Little Fuck Doll' Chapter One
Due to the overwhelming popularity of this sample chapter from my 5* rated 'Dirty Little Fuck Doll', I have decided to leave it on my blog indefinitely. If you enjoy what you read below, then you can follow the links at the bottom of this post and buy the full Kindle edition from Amazon.
Part One
An explosion of warm air,
caused by the back-draft of a departing train, swirled the busked rendition of
Fontella Bass' 'Rescue Me' around her; as Chloe click-clacked her way down the
mosaic steps of Holborn station. For a soundtrack to the beginning of her
Friday night, it could hardly have been a more a fitting coincidence. She
needed to be swept off her feet, to be taken in somebody's arms; she needed to
be rescued from her day. Yet the rush of air, rumble of a carriage and the beat
of Fontella's began to discharge the strains of her irritating day, even the
frustration of the packed platform did little to mute her growing optimism of
the carriage home, and a relaxing evening ahead.
Chloe Sykes was a 24 year old
part-time glamour model, full-time office dogsbody. Standing at a little over
five foot six (or five foot ten in those heels), she had poker straight
voluminous dark hair which met the curve of her shapely back; and could easily
be described as the kind of promiscuite who would prefer to be strutting around
naked all day, to wasting her time with monotonous reports.
As a precursor to the excessive
August heat, she dressed very slightly that morning in a profitably thin grey
dress, that was enchantingly tight in the bodice and extravagantly flowing in
the skirt. A style which more than complimented her Barbiesque figure. She was
barely a size eight, and her waify waist aided her surgically perfected
cleavage to appear even more sensational to the interested onlooker. That dress
had drawn the admiration of many a male colleague during the day, yet it had
also attracted a constant bitchiness and stream of derisory comments from her
aging female boss.
She paused for a moment at the
entrance to the crowded platform, her squinted eyes flitted around to find a
suitable gap in the heated throng, she chose to go left, tick-tocking past the
sweaty workers and tourists, most of whom (even the women) followed her with
their inquisitively hopeful eyes. Her own child like doe-eyes, lashes matted to
perfection with mascara and gradated with light blue shadow, to compliment her
light grey iris', jerked listlessly around: at the attire of other women, at
the branded bags they were carrying, yet mostly at men. She was vehemently
obsessed with men, with everything about them: their look, style, language and
mannerisms. She liked strong men, with big hands that could look after her. She
liked polite and considerate men, yet ones who could revert to their primitive
instincts in intimate situations. She liked taller, slightly shorter, older,
younger, any shade of hair and of any financial stability. She liked men. Everything
else was merely superfluous.
More people flooded on to the
platform, in a mass of over and slightly dressed bodies, and pert Chloe gave
them all the seductive once over. A brief glance at their shape and style could
answer a thousand of her questions, except on those occasions where she deigned
to discover more. But, she wasn't the kind of doll to solely venture in to bed
with men of wealthy means, for her, the huge, energetic cock of a considerate
lover was worth any number of expensive shopping sprees. Yet, a combination of
both these attributes, would mean that those few special guys could call on
Chloe whenever they felt their urgent need.
She was one of those girls with
a reputation amongst her friends for being insatiably addicted to all manners
of sexual adventurism, some of whom had previously joked that she should work
in the sex industry, to which she cheekily replied: "I'm a slag, not a
whore." Chloe Sykes simply couldn't fuck a man she didn't want, one that
she didn't chemically and physically need to populate her insides; she just
wanted rather a lot of them. For her, sex was never about the sensation of love
between two partners, but for the love of the sensation she invariably felt
when sandwiched between two kaleidoscopic orgasms, almost choking on her own
tongue and vibrating to her core through sheer delight.
She was still humming the
chorus she had heard on her way down the steps, as the gentle buzzing of the rails
grew steadily louder, the train lit up a slight bend in the tunnel before it
reached the station, with the onslaught of air flowing right through her thin
All Saints dress, the refreshing breeze brought a welcome cooling sensation to
her temperate body. She twisted her lips to one side and sharply exhaled
through her nose, as she noticed the tightly packed carriages. It had always
been the same at five-thirty on a Friday, yet Chloe the optimist never lost
hope that one day, on just one occasion, she might actually enjoy her journey
home. She darted on, between the exiting passengers, around over-weight
tourists and amongst the robotic office workers; finding herself a Chloe sized
space at the far end of the carriage.
A well dressed man in his mid
to late thirties had cast an intrigued eye over Chloe, as she ducked and pushed
her way through; then found himself in the fortunate position to be standing
next to her. He gazed surreptitiously across at her sandy brown skin,
tantalising legs and tempestuous chest, with a lascivious curiosity. She tapped
her fingers against the side of her rippled skirt to Fontella's catchy riff,
oblivious to the truth that she was being studiously admired.
Mark had finished work on a
high that day, having met all of his sales targets for the month; targets that
were set so unobtainably high, that his boss couldn't let the occasion pass
without handing Mark the profiteer a handsome bonus. He felt like a king of the
modern world, totally unbeatable. Just minutes before, he had been meandering
down the breezeless Newgate Street with a certain animation in his step, and then
he found this titillating doll to visually devour on his ride home. The minutes
passed, as their bodies swayed intimately closer and closer, until it crossed
his mind that if he could sell steel to the Chinese, there was a possibility he
could perhaps negotiate her imaginary lace thong off, and sample her with much
more than just his eyes. A thong that was imaginary in his over-sexed
imagination, yet non-existent in her Friday outfit.
Mark flew forward unexpectedly,
as the train braked hard into Tottenham Court Road, he caught her abruptly with
his shoulder and silently cursed himself for such an act of idiotic clumsiness,
as his buoyant mood was temporarily dented. But, as Chloe turned to face him, she
felt an abdominal rush consume her tiny frame. Her expansive grey eyes danced
confidently around his glorious physique, he had that dark floppy hair she
adored. She glanced momentarily into his dark green eyes, feeling such an
intrigue that she immediately decided that this would not be the only time she
engaged in such an act. He was tall, with a well maintained body, perfectly
obvious though his tightly fitted white shirt, and tailored sandy chinos. He
clearly obtained this muscular shape from an intense fitness schedule, she
thought he could probably fuck for hours. Chloe narrowed her gaze to sneak him
a smile before turning back, a glow reverberating happily around her womb. Mark
was buoyed again. He moved away slightly to get a better look at her, resting
himself on one of those ridiculous half seats you find at the back of every
carriage.
Once the train pulled into
Oxford Circus, the waiting density of impatient passengers announced the
imminent end of the unwanted micro-space separating the two sexual libertines.
Chloe took a tiny step back, resting a Kurt Geiger either side of Mark's
welcoming legs. He insidiously savoured the back of her tawny arms, and was within
the zone of proximity to steal a faint whiff of her morning Chanel, mixed with
the evocative odour of a girl on a baking day. The impetuous travellers
continued to force their way through the doors, causing the unbearable
temperature to rise even further. Chloe was squashed up against Mark, yet
continued to face away from him, as her willowy form rubbed against the growing
bulge in his trousers; a kittenish thought entered her playful mind.
His heart beat strong and fast,
as he thought about reaching out to grab the little tease, and pull her onto
him, such was the alluring effect she was inducing within him. Chloe chose her
moment to pounce with perfection, once the train jerked forward to pull out of
the station, she used gravity as her excuse to sink backwards into his lap.
Barely a millimetre of expensive fabrics then separated their hungry genitalia.
She half turned around, said "Hi", then turned away, wriggling her
ass in his groin to 'get comfortable'.
"You don't mind do
you?" She quizzed him, through partially squinted eyes.
"Not at all." He
answered, his posh-boy London accent caused her intestines to dance around a
little more. Yet he was tremendously confused by that point; was she teasing or
inviting him? He still couldn't decide, whether she wanted more than a tease
and somewhere to sit, or not? The train turned sharply, Mark put one of his exquisitely
large hands on Chloe's slender waist to steady her. She pushed her taut flesh
hard against his well groomed hand, pressing her body down on his waiting
crotch. As Mark tightened his grip on her, Chloe felt the lump in his trousers
grow, a fuzzy sensation blistered the surface of her skin.
The train twisted and jerked
through Central London, as it made its way west. The flirtatious couple
continued with their silent interlock; by then, he had both hands on her, and a
semi-erect cock that was becoming increasingly eager. The worries of her day,
and the hatred of her bitch-boss were but a distant memory. She had already
decided that she was going to fuck Mark (although she still didn't know his
name at that point), and they were going to do it repeatedly. She'd make sure
of that. Just in case Mark didn't fully appreciate what she was planning, Chloe
leant forwards, lifting her arse a little on one side, then slipped her hand
between their purring bodies, and with a confident sense of purpose, grabbed
his cock. Mark could no longer contain the emotions within him, he released a
brief high pitched nasal grunt, as she rolled his swollen head between her
slender forefinger and thumb; he groaned again, an old guy standing nearby
turned away with a look of disgust.
Mark gripped her waist firmly,
the way she liked it. Chloe was well known for her admiration of strong men, for
their ability to handle her with a sense of artistry; she had never been a
subscriber to the fulfilment of the deft touch. He looked up at the ceiling, trying
desperately to control himself, she turned to him:
"Where are you
going?"
"Ruislip." He
responded, after clearing his throat.
She tilted her head slightly,
pursed her lips, staring momentarily at his packed white shirt, bulging in the
best possible way.
"Oh. I'm getting off at
White City." She announced, lifting her eyes to meet his own adoring green
gaze, yet making no effort to hide her admiring glances around his swaying
body.
"Uh-huh." Mark was
lost for a more cohesive response, partly due to her continual massaging of his
ample bell end, and partially because this journey had become so sexually
surreal, that he had difficulty concentrating on anything other than the
perfect body that stood before him.
"You wanna get off with
me?"
Mark could take no more of her
torment, afraid of blowing his load, he span her around, looking studiously all
over his propositioner's body. Her sun drenched chest almost burst its way free
from the restraints of her bodice. She hadn't flinched or looked remotely
uncomfortable at his aggressive handling over her. Perhaps she wasn't a tease.
He glanced at her made-up face
and immaculate hair, doe-eyes meeting his gaze, she cocked her head to one
side.
"Well?" She smiled,
expectant of an answer. He ran his hands down her back and gripped her shapely
arse, pulling her waif-like body even closer.
"You're fucking right I
do!" It was as if all other sounds had fallen silent, only their own
voices mattered.
"Good." She smiled, leaning
into him so their foreheads touched momentarily, before she span back around,
positioning her arse on top of Mark's temporarily tortured dick. This time she
managed to control herself, and not grab it, but felt the warm glow of anticipation
rise through her abdomen, as she dared to imagine what the evening ahead may
have in reserve.
Chloe Sykes was a slag, there
could never be a better way of phrasing it; a simple and concise statement that
illustrated her perfectly, in the tritest of terms. It was a tag that she
herself would occasionally admit to, out of a sense of her own honesty, even
with a hint of pride. She began her sexual relations at a relatively young age,
and right from those first encounters she knew that sex was the best possible
thing to do. The satisfaction of bedding a man or boy that she wanted, the glorious
sensation of an excess of Oxytocin flowing through her veins, and the
magnificent rippling of the muscular contractions that rebounded around her
body, helped to convince her that sex was something that should be done as
often as possible. Her nick-name amongst her high-school friends was 'Fuck
Doll', initiated out of her high sex drive, and the frequency of her liaisons.
Although those peers themselves were hardly innocent, her immediate group of
friends were known misleadingly to local boys as the 'Unfuckables'; because
their young ages should dictate that they were, whereas, in appearance and
practice they quite clearly were not.
Yet in spite of all her
previous sexual adventures, she still tripped over a schoolgirl rush every time
she conquered a man she craved. As the tube juddered its way towards White
City, she uncovered an even greater level of excitement in the fact that she
didn't yet know his name. They had barely even spoken, and she was going to let
him (and indeed suggest that he does) do things to her that most other women
could barely even imagine.
She squeezed his thigh as the
train braked hard into White City; then led him off, up the stairs, out of the
concourse, across Wood Lane and hailed a cab in the direction of Wormwood
Scrubs.
Very drawn in became I.
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Hi Eleanor, I love your style. Are you going to write something with a woman being served by two men. I was asked recently by a woman to make her fantasy come through by giving her an MMF threesome. I am straight so was reluctant. Eventually I agreed. It was worth it to see the look on her face. She made sure she enjoyed herself. Please don't publish the details or this post but an MMF story would get my friend off in a hurry. Thanks Tom (thomashorn72@rocketmail.com) PS If you want to use the story I'll send it to you.
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ReplyDeleteAwesome :) Though vastly different from the sort of thing that tends to occupy my own imagination, I felt sucked in and am very curious to read on. Love your writing style, it's very colourful.
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keep working hun and thanks for the share :)
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